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Satchel Rache Offline

of Vindico
Seasons / non-binary / Hybrid
Played by Dan
Runes: 90
Domum - Ferox
x x
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Satchel's Health
 
 
Strength
Defence
Agility
Intuition
#11
[ been a while since i did this, feel free to pm if something doesn't fit.]

Satchel
Still got the scars on my back from your knife

He could scarcely recall the last time he felt this alive.

She was quick on her feet, a surge of pleasure so intoxicating he almost lost track of himself. A subtle shudder as they danced in the dirt, recalling all those times past he'd sinned just as wicked. Electric orange eyes brimmed with a strange static, making no noise even as her fangs grazed his neck. a thin trickle of crimson as he jerked his head sharply away towards safer horizons, not skipping a beat as she surged under him a warmth spreading he'd missed more then words could say.

He was heavier then her thin frame, calculating the odds as she squirmed and he yanked his fore paw away just narrowly avoiding another collision course. Shifting his pale carcass, he slammed his body with brute force down upon her. He took the blow of her shoulder full to the chest, inside he was writhing with delight to taste such pain again. As he absorbed it, he shoved back, ears tucked flat and tail to the side as he kept his back paws braced for balance. Not wanting to damage the merchandise too badly, he decided not to go with a killing blow.

Jaws spread wide, his fangs a little longer then average gave an advantage in this sport of blood. Twisting in a lithe and swift sort of way, he aimed to grab hold of her neck and force her to submit. Shooting out a forelimb, he attempted to pin her wing to her body and make it difficult to move. Oozing a foul breath into her ears, his heart like a ghost town as it beat inside his chest. Free falling into oblivion, hopefully to never return again.

cara vs satchel for breeding rights
round 1/3

ooc:
code by chip
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Caracara Madar Offline

Loner of Vindico
3 years & 5 months Seasons / Female / Familiar
Played by Saffie
Runes: 60
Domum - Ferox
x x
*
Caracara's Health
 
 
Strength
Defence
Agility
Intuition
#12


Adrenaline flooded her system, her heart pounded against her chest, blood rushed in her ears. However it was disappointing when her fangs only grazed the right side of his neck, missing their intended target and obtaining no grip. Her right shoulder connected with his chest, a moderate bruise forming across the point of her shoulder as a result. Her lifted right foreleg sought to snap back towards the ground, her opponents left forepaw spared from talons as her forepaw connected once more with the ground, her weight redistributing accordingly. As they collided, her opponent shoved back, his heavier weight causing a moderate bruise to form across her chest and forcing her to slide back several inches. Fangs flashed towards her left sided neck (you didn't specify, and only her left side would be semi-exposed) and in response, wings snapped out, flapping once in an attempt to lift her off the ground several inches, causing his fangs to leave behind only moderate lacerations at the midway point of her left sided neck. As a result, his attempt to pin her wing would also fail, though she hoped that the sudden burst of her wing seeking to stretch out would tweak his foreleg at an awkward angle.

Parted jaws hungrily, seeking to grab a hold of his face. Her top fangs sought to puncture his right eye while her lower jaw sought to hook around the corner of his lower right jaw. If successful she could not only blind him, but shred his pretty face and that thought was more than enjoyable. Wings beat the air continuously, hoping to stir up dust to irritate her opponent. Forelegs extended forward, seeking to dig into either side of his neck, talons out stretched hoping to dig in deep and keep him closer. Left forepaw sought to sink into the right side of his neck, just above his right shoulder, and her right forepaw sought to sink into his left sided neck, just above his left shoulder. He would pay. All the while she sought to keep him in front of her.

Defenses remained in tact: eyes narrowed, ears pinned, hackles raised. Her skull was level with her spine, chin tucked while her shoulders rolled forward and neck scrunched. Legs curled up towards her body to avoid being grabbed while wings stretched out to keep her elevated. Her tail was aligned with her spine, flying like a banner of war. Lips peeled back to expose daggers, pushing extra skin around her eyes. Abdominal muscles flexed to aid in keeping her legs curled up towards her body like a bird.

CARA vs SATCHEL for FORCE CLAIM

2/3

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Satchel Rache Offline

of Vindico
Seasons / non-binary / Hybrid
Played by Dan
Runes: 90
Domum - Ferox
x x
*
Satchel's Health
 
 
Strength
Defence
Agility
Intuition
#13
Satchel
Still got the scars on my back from your knife

So.

This was both the best and worst thing to come his way in quite some time. A strange ballad, so near his beating heart it almost hurt. Almost. At first, it was a strange concoction,working through his blood stream like a dreaded illness. A malignant diagnoses so intent on taking over, he paused to wonder how these things still happened. How after all this time, it still got under his skin.

She was a feisty beauty, taking hold of what remained and turning it inside out. Half speechless, he hardly dare register the blood she was intent on spilling. An epiphany of sorts, a jack hammer heart rendering him useless. Breathing deep, as he sailed into the darkness with little left to show. Crashing hard into reality, oh how it hurt to admit these things about himself after everything. Blinking away the unknown he summoned once more that selfish dregs only to find utter emptiness.

And then.

For a while the fighting felt like the only way out, the only way to self discovery. As if he was so out of touch, not a single atom of this universe could reach him. A dramatic touch, failing to comprehend his part as he smothered himself in dust. If he didn't slow down now, how could he ever claim to be himself? Pride, stinging to the edges as he eased into conflict without a sound he took her punishment no matter how personal it got. From the inside out, he had been wrong for quite a while now.

Braced for the inevitable, her teeth tore just under his eye shaking his head in subtle defiance. Any other opponent he would not cease till he saw evidence of bone, jerking away just in time to save his sight. Blood flowing freely, his penitence for all these crimes unanswered. A snarl, half hearted as he aimed for her under belly ears back and tail tucked for defense. If only he understood why he did the things he did. Glancing up towards her eyes, a shudder rendering him alive once more. Alas dear planet, alas.

cara vs satchel for breeding rights
round 1/3

ooc:
code by chip
[Image: 1432sux.jpg]
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Caracara Madar Offline

Loner of Vindico
3 years & 5 months Seasons / Female / Familiar
Played by Saffie
Runes: 60
Domum - Ferox
x x
*
Caracara's Health
 
 
Strength
Defence
Agility
Intuition
#14


Jaw sank into the right side of his face, though barely missing his eye. Her head thrashed wildly, seeking to rip open the lower right side of his face and leave behind a nasty scar. Claws sink into the desired position on either side of his lower neck, just above his shoulders. Toes flexed as she sought to dig deeper into his flesh with her talons. He was a fool, trying to defeat her! A snarl ripped hungrily from her jaws, teeth bared. She would release her hold on his face, if only briefly hoping to get another chance to puncture his eye, but instead he would try to dive under her.

He sought to dive under her, hind legs sought to extend, talons flexed clawing wildly so that she might scratch his face and deter his attack to her belly (pending damage on whether he decides to go for her belly again). She sought to keep her the talons on her forepaws imbedded in his flesh so that he would have to rip himself free to get full excess to her belly. Her skull tipped to her right, jaws hungrily seeking to sink into his spine. She aimed to have her jaws come down on his spine like a 't' at the midway point of his back. If she were lucky, she could paralyze him.

Defenses remained in tact: eyes narrowed, ears pinned, hackles raised. Her shoulders rolled forward as much as possible while her neck scrunched as much as possible. Limbs remained bent at the joint, her tail straight and aligned with her spine while toes remained splayed, claws hungrily searching for something to dig into. Wings remained extended to keep her airborne. Her back arched so that hind legs could defend her tender belly better, her weight supported by wings. Lips remained curled into a snarl, pushing extra skin around her eyes.

CARA vs SATCHEL for FORCE CLAIM

3/3

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The Judge  Offline

of OOC
Seasons / male / Avelorn
Played by
Runes: 75
Domum - Ferox
x x
The Judge's Health
 
 
Strength
Defence
Agility
Intuition
#15
Satchel vs Cara for Claiming and breeding rights!
[   judged by LUIS   ]


----- ROUND ONE !
SATCHEL
clarity 7 out of 15 -1 which wing did he aim for? -2 was he running at her head on? From her right side? -1 where on the wing did he try to grab? -2 what was his intentions? To maim, rip? -2 where did he push his weight into her to shove her over.
powerplay15 out of 15
defenses0  out of 10 you must state them in your posts! Eg, chin tucked, eyes slit
attack  2 out of 15 +2 for bite points deducted due to lack of clarity
injuries 15 out of 15 ;; first round, none.
ROUND ONE  TOTAL39 out of 70



CARA
clarity 11 out of 15 -2 where did his bite land instead? somewhere else on her body, air? -1 what injury with her shove did she seek to cause. bruising? -1 what did she aim to do with her bite? moderate wound? limit movement?
powerplay 14 out of 15 -1 I think it's highly unlikely his bite to her wing spread out would just miss.
defenses 10  out of 10 ;;
attack 8 out of 15 +2 for shove +3 for bite +3 for paw slam
injuries 15 out of 15 first round
ROUND ONE  TOTAL 58 out of 70




----- ROUND TWO !
SATCHEL
clarity 8 out of 15 -1 did her bite land where intended? -1 how did he know she was aiming for his forepaw? Did he sense it? See it? -2 where did he try to shove the weight on her and what was his aims, to unbalance? -3 where did he aim for her neck, which side? What was his aims,
powerplay 14  out of 15 -1 he needs to rebalance after putting paw to wing -
defenses  2 out of 10 ;;
attack  3 out of 15 +1 for shove, points deducted for clarity. 0 for paw to wing. +2 for bite.
injuries11 out of 15 -2 bruising to chest, -2 graze to neck
ROUND TWO  TOTAL38  out of 70



 CARA
clarity 15 out of 15
powerplay 13 out of 15 -2 fights happen very quickly, seems unlikely she'd fly up a few inches on time while he aimed to bite her
defenses  10  out of 10 ;;
attack8  out of 15 +3 attempted break to foreleg. +3 for attempted blinding +2 talons to neck
injuries 11  out of 15 -2 for bruising -2 for wound to neck
ROUND TWO  TOTAL  57 out of 70

----- ROUND THREE!
Satchel
clarity8 out of 15 -1 did he move in to her stomach -2 where did he aim for? hat damage was intended
powerplay 11 out of 15 -2 failed to mention what happened to forelimb -2 failed to mention if her attack to neck was successful -
defenses 2  out of 10 ;;
attack 1 out of 15 +1 for attempt to underbelly [points dedcuted for clarity]
injuries9 out of 15 -2 wound below eye -2 damaged forelimb [decided by judge] -2 wounds to neck [decided by judge]
ROUND THREE TOTAL 31 out of 70



CARACARA
clarity  15 out of 15 ;;
powerplay  13 out of 15 -2 going for his spine would leave her in an awkward position to maintain balance.
defenses 10   out of 10 ;;
attack7  out of 15 +3 bite to spine. +2 claws to face +1 seeking to worsen hold below eye +1 seeking to worsen hold on shoulders.
injuries  14 out of 15 -1 attack to underbelly
ROUND THREE  TOTAL 59 our of 70




----- TOTALS !
n Cara   out of 210 (+3 for alpha rank, -1 for 7" height difference) = 176
n  Satchel out of 210 ( -2 in realism for rogue wolf ) =   106

Cara is the winner! Satchel must give up by submitting, fleeing or passing out.





----- NOTES !
If you have any questions or concerns, please skype me. I haven't done judging in a while and if i've made a mistake I'd like to be informed about it. Sab, I found you could have gotten a way higher score if you included in more defenses, feel free to message me for help. Also, be clear on what you aimed to do with your attacks.
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